You have a nice sense of color. I like the colors you used. The ocean is very nice in particular. She has some nice greens and blues. The figure is also very well composed. I also like the texture you place in. With the lines it dose come out as a good illustration comic book have. This is not bad. However, you can try and make it more consistent. Use those line for separating the ocean, the beach and the sky. There are also some white inks you can try for the ocean. It may also be nice to have more detail in the back ground as well. Also can you have the panting with all of her in it. Try not to have her feet cropped off.

Good Work.

I really rather love this painting. To follow your questions for the group members, I'd suggest giving the girl more shading, and more detail, on her stomach. The background is so full of colour, and wonderful shapes, and movement created by the mixing colours, but you don't allow for that movement in the girls colours as well. At least, not so much in her stomach, and pants.

To "deviate" from your question and continue, I'd have suggested not using a dark line art for the girl. While yes, it makes her pop off the page, it makes the background seem out of place without it's own black pen to pull it in. My suggestion would be a brown Sakura media pen, or just pencil over lightly after the paint had dried.

My favorite part (other than your beautiful colour) is definitely the cropping of this piece. You take a normally huge "no, no" of cropping part of the legs out, and make it beautiful with her position, and lighting. Almost as if a planned photograph.

I think I'll leave it at that. The entire piece is amazingly beautiful the way it is, but this is what I'd suggest for you. Just as a thought though, this is the only piece I've seen by you. So forgive me if I am out of line.